Score: 10

"damn dude!"

submission: floo

date: December 29, 2009

that animation was amazing!! totally sick! i loved it! and the randomness still kinda made sense, like atleast there was a character with kind of a personality and he followed a timeline! really well done!

Score: 10

"aaahahahahahaha"

submission: Zenmumburu

date: December 23, 2009

that was sooo funny!! really clever how you did the subtitles, hilaaaarious

Score: 10

"great!!"

submission: Report: Lord Of The Flies

date: December 4, 2009

i love it, it was a great idea, it was very plesant, nice to watch! the only thing i would have added is, i would have had the fly lord's mouth move around while he spoke! and tiny little fart noises as a product of it's movement! maybe even have little drops of spit or something coming out of the mouth! but it's still fine without that! oh and the mouths are moving when the characters talk, only a little but, when the teacher speaks his mouth drifts north sloooowly, maybe work on that but otherwise it was great!

Score: 5

"need to end it"

submission: Love lost, love found.

date: November 26, 2009

really great, but it restarts and the music gets overlapped and it sounds awful

Score: 10

"i heard this as more punk than metal"

submission: The Things We Never Said

date: November 24, 2009

really good, i loved the colors, especially of text when you had words on the screen. it was a great, and well told story. easy to follow with this animation, i loved the character design. the whole thing was very well done, i don't remember how to suggest something for a collection, i've done it before but i forget hyow to recomment for a collection, if you message me how i'll totally help out

Score: 5

"well this being your first is irrelevent"

submission: HappyStep

date: November 23, 2009

everybody always says "this is my first" but really experience doesn't outway talent, and you did good so you did better than most would in their first attempt, so stop saying "this is my first flash" it's obnoxious. i really like it, and the song was good, the only thing that needed changing was the little black kid in the pink clothing. he was on screen for 100% of the animation, and he wasn't even walking, his legs each did half a walk cycle then went back to the beginning then did the half a walk cycle again. change that and you will have a wonderful flash

Score: 6

"yea it was nice"

submission: Father's day - Penciw

date: November 22, 2009

but with the heads as looking so nice, and the bodies looking so bad, it looked like the faces were traced from photographs, and the bodies are a reflection of your true artistic ability, so if you used a smaller, smoother brush for the bodies it would have been alot better, especially considering that most of this was loop after loop, when you cram a flash full of those kinds of loops, the loops need to be mr. clean here! you should have used more layers in the laptop because the bottom edge of the laptop looks like it was there, and then after the finger crossed over it you tried redrawing it how it used to be, but with a bigger brush so it didn't work out, and since like i said, a great portion of this cartoon was the dad in that 2 frame loop of hand up, then hand in a fist with one finger poking the keyboard, you neeed to clean that loop up, it's distracting. and you gotta go to findsounds.com or wherever to find little sound effects for the actions. and maybe when you have sound effects you can show the dad looking at the camera with a raised eyebrow at some point like "what are those kids doing?" and you can do the typical cartoon thing where you hear a bunch of commotion coming from where the kids are, and he stops and looks, but when he looks the noise stops, and as soon as he gets back to work the sound happens again, and this repeats a few times, the dad getting more frustrated everytime, until he goes out to look. and when he is walking out to look, you gotta have his head bounce a bit, it adds some character.
so yea, work on the bodies of the characters
the sound effects
and clean up them sketchy loops
keep it up!

Score: 10

"well there was too many pauses for text"

submission: Roomies! Episode One!

date: November 17, 2009

and the toaster had some terrible voice acting, and the lip syncing wasn't very good, i liked the length but you need a better microphone.
and the characters need name introductions, oh and one more thing that you can easily revise would be that when they had first heard the toaster talk, and they're hiding behind the couch, and the redhead "jake" says "i think it did . . . but just to be sure" the transition between well drawn jake, and typical horribly drawn jake, wasn't seemless, it needed work, the way i would have done it would be he says "i think it did" then you do a shot from just behind the toaster, and you see the couch, and his head pokes up all scared. that woulda been nice, oh and also when they're behind the couch, and jake is done talking, the blue haired guy goes to say something to the toaster, and he is all of a sudden on the other side of jake, when originally he was on the viewer's side of jake.
loved the effort tho, aaaan i'm looking forward to the rest of the series!

Score: 5

"what i don't get is"

submission: Projection

date: November 17, 2009

how is this your "anniversary" gift. if you've only been together for 123 days? and like 16 weeks er whatever, i mean, an anniversary is 56 weeks, which is 365 days, so this is like a monthaversary present, and all those "..." moments were kind of annoying, and i mean it's great that this is just a gift for one person, and like who are we to judge something you made for someone we don't know, but why would you submit this to the internet? you submit to the internet to show the world, and if you only wanna show one girl, you shoulda just shoved it onna flash drive and took it to her house, or e-mailed it to her

Score: 10

"i loved this"

submission: Check Please

date: November 16, 2009

hilarious, good animation, nice voice acting, and a message for the kids! there was nothing wrong with this cartoon!!