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it was a god lip sync, and the fact that the rest of the face kept moving between the three or four draiwngs added to the continuity of the mouth as it wiggled around. the only thing that i would change is the mouth itself. A little more detail in each mouth position would go a long way, specifically just in darkening it. (well technically lightening it because the background was black, and the lines were subtracted from it with a sort of peach color but... ) i just mean, like filling in the gap between the upper lip and the tongue, or between the upper teeth and the tongue, to kind of make it darker there, it would be more entertaining to watch if the mouth was made up of more lines and stuff!
but i liked it! very well done, ESPECIALLY considering it's the first lip sync you've done!

tomzon responds:

thank you :D
i myself think that the mouth is drawn poorly at the beginnig,because i did not know what i was
trying to achive in the beginning :3
I should try coloured animation next .w.

well done, and very cute! I enjoy seeing cartoons that are still cartoons without so much internet randomness (not that i don't totally dig internet randomness, i'm just saying i appreciate the slow cute pace of this)

I was really impressed with the feel of the whole thing! I mean the speech bubbles could use a bit of sprucing up to match the rest but i really liked the writing and the images and how the music fit in. It would be even better if this was the storyboard for an animation but I really like it!

linda-mota responds:

I agree with oyu on the speech bubbles, but celx (guy who did programing) has a lot on his plate. I think the most important part are the drawings and words. As long as everyone can understand both I'm good. If I was an animator I'd do more, but again that's not my forte. Thank you for the review and watching this.

With love.

very quick, but well animated nonetheless.

well animated and original! i liked it!

well animated and funny! it was painful watching sonic light his cig backwards tho lol

it's great. coulda usedmore animation

and the voiceacting was kind of lame, especially with kyo when he did that thing where he whispers to indicate yelling. but all over it was good

lol

that was silly

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