you should be proud!
the animation was pretty good! and the style of having the characters have sketchy outlines that was really good looking, but voice acting can make or break an animation and some of yours was pretty weak, same thing with the special effects, like when his eyes were going back and forth, or when he was dissapearing, actions like that have to be spontanious, random, if you have the eyes twitch at 3 different speeds back and forth and loop that, it would look better than just back and forth at the constant speed, (Same goes for the dissapearing) and i totally sound critical but keep in mind i loved this!! but it needed more business! if his eyes quiver like twice and he turns his whole head and they quiver a few more times, and so on, that would look amazing, much better character animation! and when he was dissapearing he like didn't even move! but it was great! so don't take this the wrong way! i just think those are the few little touch ups that would make it even better! but you definitely kept me wanting to know the rest of the story!!